Oh your heart. Oh my heart.
Given the context of your real dog, I'm going to try to be narratively objective in my comments. No complaints, so far, except...I get the wink-wink of the Muse, but it's a little weak.
7th Goddess seems to a jumping off point for everybody, not really a plot element... of course i'm not sure there will be a plot element here at H-H... :)
Very arty farty. The Seventh Goddess was actually a lingerie shop in Alberquerque. Who knew? So, off to the next installment
Interesting start.
Oh your heart. Oh my heart.
ReplyDeleteGiven the context of your real dog, I'm going to try to be narratively objective in my comments. No complaints, so far, except...
ReplyDeleteI get the wink-wink of the Muse, but it's a little weak.
7th Goddess seems to a jumping off point for everybody, not really a plot element... of course i'm not sure there will be a plot element here at H-H... :)
ReplyDeleteVery arty farty. The Seventh Goddess was actually a lingerie shop in Alberquerque. Who knew? So, off to the next installment
ReplyDeleteInteresting start.
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