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  1. and here i am creeping up like an old friend... your post shows on my side bar as all white... very interesting... eh? x

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  2. "Losing," not "loosing."

    I quite like this. The narrative starts well, but then fades until almost half-way through. Your aesthetic, style, is intriguing as always.

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  3. well I cannot but love this, like a chemical journey through a disjointed Pynchonesque landscape.
    I cannot figure out the rules of the river tho - am I missing a brain cell

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  4. as always, love love love your style, and in the end remain mystified in the telling. Lovely, hearthwrenching, and poetic

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  5. You do your own thing and you do it exceptionally well. I was reminded of Virginia Woolf at times. I really like this.

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  6. It helps to understand your motivation for these pieces. They're heartfelt and sad and beautifully written. I think you may have outdone yourself on this one.

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